Fahrenheit 451 Analysis

10. Follow Montag's ideological progression. Where does it truly begin and what are the most important instances that spur its growth? Use specific examples from the text in your argument.

Montag's ideology changes in a big way over the course of the book Fahrenheit 451. In the beginning of the book, Montag likes his job as a fireman, and agrees with the policies that go with it. " He wanted above all, like the old joke, to shove a marshmallow on a stick in the furnace, while the flapping pigeon-winged books died on the porch and lawn of the house." (3). Then, he meets a girl named Clarisse McClellan, who thinks a lot differently than almost everyone else Montag has met. Clarisse asks Montag a question that really gets Montag to think about his life how it is. " Then she seemed to remember something and came back to look at him with wonder and curiosity 'Are you happy?' she said." (10). This question leads to Montag questioning everything that he believes in. " 'God, it's gotten big on me. I don't know what it is. I'm so damned unhappy, I'm so mad, and I don't know why. I feel like I'm putting on weight. I feel fat. I feel like I've been saving up a lot of things, and don't know what. I might even start reading books.' " (64).
 After reading these books, he feels that he has to make sure that they are preserved. He thinks of people that may be able to help him, and he thinks of an old man that he met in the park. " Montag went to his bedroom closet and flipped through his file-wallet to the heading: FUTURE INVESTIGATIONS (?). Fabers' name was there. He hadn't turned it in and he hadn't erased it." (75). He meets the old man, and he gives Montag a communication system to put in his ear so that Faber can stay safe in his home and still help Montag. Montag then tries to trick Beatty, the fire captain, by giving him only one book. It is not illegal for a fireman to take one book, so Montag thinks that as long as he turns one in, he will be off the hook. However, Beatty discovers him, and takes action against Montag's book collection. " 'Why,' said Montag slowly, 'we've stopped in front of my house' " (110). Then, because Beatty will destroy the books, and find Faber, Montag makes a big decision. " And then he (Beatty) was a shrieking blaze, a jumping, sprawling gibbering mannikin, no longer human or known, all writhing flame on the lawn as Montag shot one continuous pulse of liquid fire on him" (119). Montag goes from being completely happy with burning books, to killing Beatty to protect them. His views regarding books greatly changed over the course of the book.

TU Tuesday- Local

Article: http://www.timesunion.com/local/article/Lawbeat-Capital-Region-crime-doesn-t-take-a-3593209.php

I read an article that said that "Schenectady County had the state's highest rate of index crimes, which cover murders, rapes, robberies, aggravated assaults, burglaries, larcenies and stolen cars." This is very serious, because these are crimes that are very threatening to the people living in these areas. These numbers get scarier when you compare them to areas known for the crime. " To put that in perspective, all three local counties showed higher crime rates than the Bronx (2,524.9), Brooklyn (2,345.6), Queens (1,779) and Staten Island (1,444.4)." These areas are notorious for their crime rates, and the fact that local counties have more crime than those areas is a very scary fact. However, the news isn't all negative for areas near where we live. "Saratoga County had the state's eighth-lowest index crime rate (1,393.1), 12th-lowest property crime rate (1,333.7), fifth lowest violent crime rate (59.4) and sixth-lowest violent gun crime rate (3.6)." It is nice to see that while we have some crime filled areas close by us, that there are still counties in the Capital region that know the right thing to do. While the number of crimes in areas like Albany and Schenectady may be scary, they are not the highest crime rate. "In both those categories, topping the list was Erie County, which includes Buffalo. Erie had a violent crime rate of 455.1 and violent gun crime rate of 125.1. Monroe County (93.2) was second in violent gun crimes." While we live by some crime filled areas, there are many different places that are worse, like Erie County near Buffalo.

5. I appreciate the military because…

I appreciate the military because…

they protect our country everyday, so that we can keep our rights and our customs. They sacrifice their lives, and spend time away from home, away from their families, so that America can remain the way it is. They fight for what is right, and protect the ideas and beliefs of America. I appreciate the military because I would not be able to live the way I do today if they did not fight for our rights. Their families sacrifice just as much, because while serving in the military, they are away from home, and away from their kids, but it is important for them to serve their country. I appreciate the military, because they make so many sacrifices for America.

What is Crippling Us?

In the article I read by John Taylor Gatto, he argues that organized school is not necessary for children to learn. " Do we really need school? I don't mean education, just forced schooling: six classes a day, five days a week, nine months a year, for twelve years. Is this deadly routine really necessary? And if so, for what? Don't hide behind reading, writing, and arithmetic as a rationale, because 2 million happy homeschoolers have surely put that banal justification to rest." (Gatto). I disagree with this statement, because in my case, my parents work full time. I don't have a way to learn at home, so school is a way to gain knowledge. While I agree it is not the most entertaining part of my day, I still need to go learn things that I will need to know for college, and my future. Gatto also argues that schools should divide kids into different groups, for different criteria. " Modern, industrialized, compulsory schooling was to make a sort of surgical incision into the prospective unity of these underclasses. Divide children by subject, by age-grading, by constant rankings on tests, and by many other more subtle means, and it was unlikely that the ignorant mass of mankind, separated in childhood, would ever reintegrate into a dangerous whole." ( Gatto). I believe that schools in our area divide kids into the best extent possible. With regents, honors, and AP options for each class, the children in schools are divided into groups where everyone is close academically. Dividing the school system to a great extent would force school to become much more stressful for students, and it would just make life worse for students. Gatto wants to improve society, but his plan is going to lead to more stress, and a less active society. In the Ray Bradbury book Fahrenheit 451, he shows how he believes society is moving toward a world where written word is forbidden. " All the minor minor minorities with their navels to be kept clean. Authors, full of evil thoughts, lock up your typewriters." (Bradbury, 57). This line is saying that all minorities must be kept happy, and the only way to do that, and make sure nothing bad is said about them, is to stop authors' messages in books from getting out to the public. Bradbury also makes a comment, like Gatto, on the direction that school is moving. " ' School is shortened, discipline relaxed, philosophies, histories, languages dropped, English and spelling gradually gradually neglected, finally almost completely ignored. Life is immediate, the job counts, pleasure lies all about after work." ( Bradbury, 55). Bradbury also thinks that school is becoming more relaxed, and that discipline is no longer important in present society. I also disagree with Bradbury, because I think it is important for stress in life to be controlled. School is very competitive as it is, because you need good grades to get into a respected college and get a well paying job. While it makes for an entertaining story, I don't think many of the points in Fahrenheit 451 are relevant to today's society. 

Tried and True

http://writingprompts.tumblr.com/post/17477297690/my-28-most-tried-and-true-writing-prompts

If I had ten copies of myself, I would make each focus on a different aspect of my life. Many would focus on doing school work, like going to school during the day, and doing the homework. I would have one for each class of the day, so that each one is an expert on what they are working on. The next would focus on sports, that way, they can develop skills much faster because that is all that they are focusing on. I could have many different copies work on different sports, so that I have skills in many different sports. Another would be used for house work. The rest of the copies would be used to go places for me, for events that I do not want to go to. That way, I have all free time to hang out with my friends.

TU Tuesday Commencement Speech

Speech: http://news.stanford.edu/news/2005/june15/jobs-061505.html

Book: http://www.amazon.com/Outliers-Story-Success-Malcolm-Gladwell/dp/0316017922

The speech I chose was Steve Jobs' commencement speech to Stanford University. He talks about how he was successful, and what factors led him to the path he took. "have the courage to follow your heart and intuition. They somehow already know what you truly want to become. Everything else is secondary." I agree that it is very important to go with your gut, and do what you really think is the right option for you, because when you over think things, you may not be happy with the result. You also have to have an intention to be successful. "Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish.". You have to go after what you want, but you have to stay yourself, and that is what Steve Jobs is saying with this quote.

In a complex or difficult situation, it is easy to just give up, but people who really want to be successful will keep trying to make it work." Don't lose faith. I'm convinced that the only thing that kept me going was that I loved what I did. You've got to find what you love. And that is as true for your work as it is for your lovers. Your work is going to fill a large part of your life, and the only way to be truly satisfied is to do what you believe is great work." Doing what you love, and enjoy doing, will help you be happy in your future. You have to like it, and also be very skilled at it to make a future out of it. Another story that explains the path to success is Outliers by Malcolm Gladwell. In his book, he talks about what work needs to make you happy and also prosperous. " Those three things - autonomy, complexity, and a connection between effort and reward - are, most people will agree, the three qualities that work has to have if it is to be satisfying." I find that this is true in a lot of cases. If you enjoy doing it, and it continues to challenge you, then it will make you happy in the future.

Steve Jobs says that you can't have a clear view of the results of your decisions, but you have to pick the right options for you. "you can't connect the dots looking forward; you can only connect them looking backwards. So you have to trust that the dots will somehow connect in your future. You have to trust in something — your gut, destiny, life, karma, whatever. This approach has never let me down, and it has made all the difference in my life." Trusting in yourself, and your instincts, will lead you down the path to success. You have to trust in yourself, and your decisions, that the end result will be what you want it to be. Belief in yourself is one of the most important things to have in order to be successful.

34 What I Spend Money On

Usually, when I spend my money, I have saved it up for a long time, in order to get something expensive. I have saved up for things like the Ipod touch, a new baseball glove, and other fun things, usually related to technology or sports. Now, I am saving up for a car, because unlike my other two brothers, I do not have a car waiting for me when I get my license. I will more than likely end up buying a used car, but whatever I can get will be great.

Love To Know Slideshow

  
http://freelance-writing.lovetoknow.com/Slideshow:Free_Writing_Prompts~4


If you were stranded far away from home and only had $20 in your wallet, what would you do? 
If I was stranded and only had $20 left, I would spend it on food. I would do this, because there are many places that you can stay for a couple of nights for free, like a friend's house or a shelter. There are almost no ways to get the amount of food you need on a daily basis for free. Food is most important because you can't function, or think, without the necessary nutrients that food provides. In order to think of a way to get more money, or to get back home, you would absolutely need food. That is why I would spend my $20 on food. 

Creative Contest 3

Hard Work, effort, and happiness.

Philosophy ( communism)

Source: http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/129104/communism

Communism is the political system that calls for public ownership instead of private property. It attempts to create a classless society by making everyone equal. " Communism is thus a form of socialism—a higher and more advanced form, according to its advocates." It was created by Karl Marx, who said that through Communism, government would no longer be necessary. However, I do not agree with it. First, I do not fully agree with the ideological theory, because it does not account for slackers, and people who are very lethargic. People are less inclined to work hard if they do not benefit from their work. Therefore, people will be less motivated to do work, because everyone gets an equal share. Also, in reality, Communism never works out like the theory. It usually leads to totalitarian governments, because people get so hungry for power. So instead of having no government necessary, they have a ruler who completely controls every aspect of everyone's life.

Tu Tuesday- Classified

Red carabiner plus keys and store tags lost in vicinity of Stuyvesant Plaza and Fuller Road.

Classified: http://timesunion.kaango.com/ad-keys-lost-fuller-road-stuyvesant-plaza-area/20494132

This story is fiction.

A Long Walk Home

All I wanted was to go to the grocery store to pick up some food. I walked to my red truck, ready to go home, eat, and go to sleep after a long day. I reached into my pocket, but I felt nothing. I kept feeling around in my pocket, but still, nothing. I tried my other pockets, but found nothing but my cell phone and some pocket lint. I went back into the store to see if I had just dropped them on the floor, but I could not find them anywhere. I had no idea where my keys were by now. All I knew was that they were " lost in vicinity of Stuyvesant Plaza and Fuller Road."

I went back out to my truck, but I had to think of another way to get home. I didn't know the bus schedule, but there wasn't a bus stop anywhere within walking distance anyway. Then I began to think, how will I get into my house? I don't have any keys. I had to find those keys before I left. They were easily identified, with a " Red carabiner plus keys". I looked for about an hour through the entire parking lot, and asking anyone if they had seen my keys. I could not find them after a lot of time searching. I just decided to walk home, and find some way to get into my house, to grab my spare truck key.

A half hour walk later, I had reached my house. Both doors were locked, and with no keys, I would have to get creative. I used my credit card to open my front door, like I was a robber getting into my own house. I would most likely have to get my truck in the morning, because I sure wasn't walking back over to the store. Never the less, the long day was over, and I was finally home.

R= Rice Pilaf

2 tablespoons butter- A simple ingredient, like the simplicity of days with our grandparents in New Jersey.

1/2 onion, minced- An added flavor to the recipe, this shows that there was always something else to experience there. 

1/2 red bell pepper, minced- an ingredient that gives the recipe a little spice, like all of the twists and turns the evenings would take with our grandparents, visiting new places around the town, and experiencing new things.

2 pinches kosher salt- A very common ingredient, but there was nothing common about the way my grandmother cooked anything. Especially her very good rice pilaf.

2 cups long grain rice- the main ingredient, just like family was the main focus of every evening we spent at our grandparents' house in New Jersey.

2 3/4 cups chicken broth- common in soup, this part of the recipe symbolizes the warmth that was felt all of the time when we were around family, and people who cared about us.

2 strips orange zest- A little added sweetness to the rice, showing what was felt when we spent time with family. Sweetness and joy.

Pinch of saffron strands, steeped in 1/4 cup hot water- another spicy ingredient, showing that you never know what to expect. There were always unexpected thrills and fun that we had when our family was together in that house in New Jersey.

1 bay leaf- we would visit most falls, and see all of the leaves that surrounded the house changing colors, and becoming yellow and orange.

1 1/2 cups frozen peas, thawed- I don't think my grandmother put peas into her rice pilaf, but she always made great tasting vegetables with all of her meals.

Golden raisins and pistachios for garnish- Yet another flavor to taste when enjoying rice pilaf. It makes me remember all of the meals my grandmother would make, so there was always a new taste to be experienced.

One of the things I remember most about my grandparents, was their great cooking, and their great warmth. In a way, this recipe expresses both of these.

Recipe from: http://www.foodnetwork.com/recipes/good-eats/rice-pilaf-recipe/index.html

Famous Poem Starters

By the shore of Gitchie Gumee, By the shining Big-Sea-Water, that is where I wish to be. 
Free to move and play on the beach, or in the water. 
The perfect place to relax, and let your cares fade away. 
Where the weather is perfect, and there are no troubles, that is where I wish to be.  
But all good things must come to an end,
and though I may have to leave,
I still dream of going there, because, that is where I wish to be.

Nursery Rhymes are relevant to life

One misty, moisty morning

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One misty, moisty morning,
When cloudy was the weather,
I chanced to meet an old man
Clothed all in leather.
He began to compliment,
And I began to grin,
How do you do?
And how do you do?
And how do you do, again?


This nursery rhyme reminds me a lot of how I spent my weekend with my family. My brother visited the college of Holy Cross for accepted students day on Sunday, but the weather was bad, and it was raining very heavily. Still, my whole family was able to enjoy the day because of how nice the campus was, and how nice the people on it were. Much like the old man who compliments in this nursery rhyme, the nice people on campus made up for the poor weather. The friendly people made it a great day, despite the weather.

Turn Your Inkblot into a butterfly

Making mistakes

it is a part of life

but it is what we do to fix those mistakes

that makes us who we are

To correct a mistake, 
you must know your mistake.
Knowing this allows you to correct it
and make it right.


 

Now you must right your wrong,

 admitting you made a mistake

is the only way you can move on,

and start to leave the mistake behind.

 

Your mistake is now far behind you, but you still have not completely corrected it. It will take all of your effort, in order to complete your correction.

 Now your mistake is gone, and you can continue your life, living freely, like a butterfly out of the cocoon

 

 

Tu Tuesday Mark McGuire

Article: http://blog.timesunion.com/mcguire/siena-tebow-sanchez-support-among-nyers-breaks-along-party-lines/13862/
About the Author: http://blog.timesunion.com/mcguire/about-mcguire/

Mark McGuire is a sports column writer who has a family of " two kids and one wife" and enjoys sports a lot.    " McGuire remained a fan at heart, a mindset forged from decades of sitting in the cheap seats." I read McGuire's story on which New York Jets quarterback has more fan support. " And there shouldn’t be a shock in this: Support between Sanchez and the highly (and publicly) religious Tebow breaks down along party lines.Democrats favor Sanchez 46-27 percent, according to the poll.Republicans favor Tebow 46-34." Being a fan himself, McGuire shows very interesting points of view on sports issues. " 'Tebow is a hero to a certain group of people. I’m a little surprised Tebow doesn’t even do better among upstate folk,' Levy said. 'You are looking at upstate, you are looking at party and looking at religiosity. He is an icon. We will see how it plays out in New York.' He shows his perspective on the issues, and because he is a true fan and not just paying attention to sports because it is his job, he is very well informed on the aspects of sports. He gives the reader a very unique experience when they read his articles.

NYT Tuesday

A Walk to the Store

You would never think a walk to the store would get you killed
shooters in my neighborhood
they do what the system allows them to do
I have felt legitimately threatened before, and I didn’t stand my ground.
anyone can feel threatened if they are scared or paranoid about their safety
You would never think a walk to the store would get you killed
but you can't risk your life.

http://www.nytimes.com/2012/04/04/sports/ncaabasketball/kentucky-built-a-title-team-on-underclassmen-expected-to-leave-early-for-the-nba.html?_r=1&ref=sports

http://learning.blogs.nytimes.com/2012/03/26/on-trayvon-martin-a-guest-post-from-a-teenager-and-some-teaching-suggestions/

Money, fame, or happiness? Are they mutually exclusive?

 Money, fame and happiness are very different things, but I don't think they are mutually exclusive. While money doesn't always lead to happiness, in a lot of cases it can make people enjoy life more. The best example is people that go from living in a poor environment, to living a very luxurious lifestyle. I'm sure that in most cases the people are much happier living with more money than being poor. Fame and money are not mutually exclusive, because if you are famous, people will pay you to appear at events. The relationship between fame and happiness depends on the situation. If someone is famous for a good thing that they have done, and they are well liked, that person will probably be very happy. The people that are famous for something bad that they have done, like Cam Newton, who is famous for his pay for play scandal in college, would probably prefer to have less fame, because people recognize them for that one thing, and not for them as a person. Money, fame and happiness are not mutually exclusive in most cases, but it really depends on the situation. 

Q= Quiznos

My restaurant is Quiznos subs, which is located in 20 Mall on Western Ave. Quiznos is similar to most sub shops, it has a counter to order subs, and some tables to sit down if you choose to eat in the restaurant instead of taking the food home. Quiznos offers a wide variety of sub selections, as well as soup and bread bowl meals. They also offer chips, cookies, and other snacks to go with your meal. Their drink selections include normal soft drinks and very good pink lemonade. The service is very good at Quiznos, because they let you take off or put on anything you want on their subs. The food comes out very quickly, even if they toast your sub. The prices are normal for a sub shop. All together, Quiznos is a very good restaurant, with its quick service, and its delicious food. I would highly recommend Quiznos to anyone who likes sub sandwiches.

Bucket List

1. Volunteer in a poor country- my cousin went to help in Rwanda a couple years ago, and said it was a great experience to help those people who had so little. I want to make a difference like that. 
2. Visit Italy- my Italian heritage is very important to me, so I would want to see all the art, and the cities with Italian culture. It would help me learn a lot about Italian culture.
3. Throw the first pitch at a major league baseball game- baseball is one of my favorite things, and since I won't be a professional athlete, throwing the first pitch would be the next best thing.
4. Go skydiving- this is not something I would normally do, but for a bucket list, you have to pack a lot of excitement into a short period of time, and I think that it would be an exciting experience.
5.  Go to the Superbowl- seeing the biggest game of the year should be on any sports fan's bucket list. It doesn't have to have my favorite team in it, because the atmosphere of the game is enough to make it a great experience.
6. Run a marathon- training and running in a marathon puts you in the best shape possible. The experience would really teach me how to take care of my body.
7. Swim with dolphins- I have no idea how this experience would feel. It is such a different activity than anything routine, so it would be fun to try.
8. See an Egyptian pyramid- everyone has seen pictures, but seeing it in person would be incredible. 
9. Go to a music festival- obviously it would have to be music that I like, but the atmosphere at a concert is so exciting, and a festival is doubles that experience.
10. Make a difference in someone's life- knowing that I left a mark on the world, even just one person, would be the best feeling to have.